Photo credit: PHOTO PROMPT Shaktiki Sharma
Cassie stepped off the curb. “Wait! Wait!” A male voice called.
She bristled. Please, no, not when I’ve made it this far.
A young man approached another young woman next to her. “I’m sorry,” he said, and embraced her. Ah, true love. Or not.
Close call, she thought.
Lord knows, it took enough nerve to get her this far. She couldn’t stay any longer. Something in her would die if she did.
The bus, a $50 fare, would get her on her way fast. Back home.
“Merry Christmas to me,” she whispered, boarding the Greyhound bus, backpack in hand.
~99 words.
Each week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts Friday Fictioneers where we’re challenged to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words, more or less, based on the picture above. It is awesome, in this blogging community, to see the many different responses that are generated from one prompt or photo. I encourage you to create your own and click the InLinkz button to add it to the Friday Fictioneers responses! While you’re at it, go to Rochelle’s link above and check out some of the other Friday Fictioneers’ responses!
Lots of ways to take this one. Nice work.
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Thanks, Lisa!
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There is a lot of sadness in this, but a glimmer of hope. I hope she finds happiness.
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Dear Pamela,
I could feel the urgency. I’m not sure what she’s running away from but I hope she makes it home safely. Well done. And a hearty welcome to Friday Fictioneers. I look forward to reading more from you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle!
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I enjoyed this installment.
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Thanks for stopping by, Eva!
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It’s sounding hopeful.
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There are so many interesting stories from this weeks prompt photo, and you did not disappoint. Loved your story.
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Thank you, Michael. I appreciate your comments!
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Welcome Pamela! And a nice start… good for her to keep moving forward…
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Thanks for reading!
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Nice post, Pamela. I’ll look forward to your next installment. TE Mark
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Thank you for stopping by and commenting!
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