Photo courtesy of Mike Vore
A Date to Remember, by Pamela Schloesser Canepa
(c) 2017, All rights reserved
“It’s small, but cozy, and there’s no one around for miles,” Tom said.
He was being so sweet, trying to honor this special day.
“Wonderful! Thanks for finding something on such short notice.”
He held my hand in his own.
“If we get a permit for a baby, we’ll move up.” He looked at me shyly.
“Or not.” I smiled, gazing on the truck. Tom didn’t know I’d failed the genetic test. Based on a small chance of Down Syndrome and/or addiction in future offspring, I’d never get approved.
“That’s okay, either way. You are what matters to me.” He smiled.
“I have to tell you something…”
“No, no explaining needed.” He took my other hand and kissed me. What a magical day.
On a tree, not far from our truck “room,” Tom carved our initials. TC + LP, married May 12, 2062.
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Such a nuanced take, I can’t decide if it’s a bleak future because of the situation, or one with hope that they are together and happy and even in the future that is what matters the most. Well done.
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Thanks for reading!
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Permit for a baby! Whoa. This slice of life really has me imagining such a future. I want to find out what happens next, and I’m rooting for their relationship!
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Me too! Thanks for reading.
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Such a sweet yet chilling look in the possiblity of our future. How sad that you have to get approval to have a family and if you have any genetics problems then you can’t have a family. Terrible thing to think could happen! Wonderful story! Nice to have you back!
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Yes, just imagine. Thank you. I’d like to do more with this one.
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I think you could do a lot with this story!
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Bleak, dystopian future. A lot of science fiction from the 1970s was like this.
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Yes, I agree with James. It sounds like a blast from the science fiction past and it is very well done.
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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A story to remember – I hope the future is not so bleak.
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Me too! Thanks for reading.
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I really like the image of true love that shines through the bleakness of the rest of the story ❤
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How futuristic. I hope they find happiness together.
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