A representation of Malachi. Photo via Pixabay.
All writing © Pamela Schloesser Canepa, 2019.
There comes a time when a parent is no longer shaping and molding her child, when she/he must simply take a step back and observe, when everything you say or advise seems to be a reiteration of things you’ve already taught them. That’s when it’s time to stand back and listen. Well, it’s the same with our main characters. This has been coming into play with the writing of my current manuscript, tentatively titled, Malachi. Malachi goes through some interesting experiences, and seeing them through his eyes was a whole lot of fun!
“I came to this job through an ad in the newspaper. It read: Acting job. Get your foot in the door. The tryout was basically an interview, and I didn’t get a call back until a week later. Probably enough time for a background check. I should have known right away that salty old guy in jeans was no director.” –Malachi, work in progress
In undertaking this novel, I knew that I wanted to see things through a different point of view. This book is in first person, and I know some people either prefer to read first person or totally shy away from it. However, it does really place you in the character’s shoes. Writing this novel for sure put me in this character’s shoes. Why did I want that? Well, Malachi is an interesting character who surfaced in my novel, Undercurrents in Time, because Cr. Milt Braddock has his fingers in something he knows nothing about handling. Malachi is one of those hired to help him deal with it. We don’t learn much about him, where he’s from, who his family is, who he relies on in times of distress, or why he does what he does. He has what we would call an interesting job, and he is good at it. That was apparent in Undercurrents. He is a twenty-year-old kid who has the skill of flying by the seat of his pants, answering hard questions on the fly, and concocting a story to help him get through any situation. He also failed out of college.
I found that, in putting myself in his shoes, I really wanted him to succeed yet understood the pitfalls he encountered. (I was once young, myself, you know). Why was he so lonesome even when he was successful? Maybe it helped that I am the mother of a son who is in his early twenties, whom I have seen flounder through a few years not knowing his direction, who has changed his path a few times. I love writing the story though, putting myself in a character’s shoes and helping him while at the same time, putting some huge mishaps on his path.
Most of all, what I have enjoyed about writing this story in first-person-point-of- view is the listening. In the morning, I get up and go to the kitchen. I think, what would Malachi do first? Then, I suppose I listen. What would be going through his head? Then I try to think like that. On that note, what would be in Malachi’s kitchen cupboard? Evidently, not much! Remember, I was once young too…
Malachi’s story will likely be published in the spring or summer of 2020. I am just getting to the end of the first draft, and will begin the process of editing, revising, and all of that fun stuff. Malachi appears in the second book of the Detours in Time series. If you haven’t yet, you can start the Detours in Time series today: https://www.amazon.com/gp/bookseries/B07F5WPK72